Draft of Quick Reference Guide

A Guide to China's Controversy Over Computers, Scientific Prestige, and Technological Worldview

In this post, I will provide a link to my draft of my Quick Reference Guide, and give directions as to what types of feedback I would like to have from my peer editors (thank you in advance).

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My Quick Reference Guide is ready for peer edits! Before you read, you should know that my controversy is about Computer Science in China, which I assume the reader has no base knowledge on. As such, I tried to be as informative as possible in every area I suspected a reader might need it, so please let me know if you understood what I wrote. I want the QRG to be accessible.

Additionally, I would really, really appreciate it if in your peer review you looked specifically at my balance of information/evidence, how I introduce sources, and the structure of the QRG.

But most of all, I would be extremely thankful for feedback on if I represented/analyzed the sides/speakers of my controversy well, and for suggestions on what I can do visually with this.

My draft of my Quick Reference Guide can be found here.

Thank you so much!